Story Structure & Outline Deep Dive Package

Ready to build an unshakeable foundation for your novel? This highly focused package is designed for authors who want expert eyes on their story's core before diving deep into drafting or revisions. Get clarity and confidence that your plot, characters, and world are set for success.

What's Included:

Comprehensive Review of Your Core Story Elements: I'll analyze your materials to pinpoint strengths, identify areas of potential improvement. This includes:

• Your Complete Novel Outline: (up to 20 pages or 5,000 words)
  • Your Synopsis: (up to 500 words)
  • First 5 Chapters of Your Manuscript: I will review them for: 
    • Who the Main Character(s) are
    • The Inciting Incident
    • Central Conflict
    • A Glimpse of the World
    • The Character's Goal (or developing goal)
    • Tone and Genre
    • Submitted in standard manuscript format: 12-point font, 1-inch margins, double-spaced
• In-Depth Editorial Letter: You'll receive a detailed, personalized letter outlining my insights on your:
  • Story Structure: Is your plot compelling and logical? Are your major turning points landing effectively?
  • Character Arcs: Are your characters evolving in meaningful ways? Do their motivations drive the plot?
  • Pacing & Flow: Does the story unfold at an engaging rhythm?
  • World-Building: Is your world rich and consistent, serving the story rather than overwhelming it?
  • Core Theme & Conflict: Is your central idea clear and powerfully explored?
• Annotated Documents: I'll provide direct comments and questions on your outline, synopsis, and manuscript pages to highlight specific areas for consideration.
• 60-Minute 1:1 Strategy & Action Plan Call: We'll schedule a dedicated video or phone call to discuss all feedback in detail, answer your questions, and craft a clear, actionable roadmap for your next steps. You'll leave with a solid plan to move your story forward with confidence.

This Package Is Right For You If:

• You're planning a new novel and want to ensure your outline is rock-solid.
• You've finished a first draft and suspect fundamental story issues, but don't need a full manuscript critique.
• You feel stuck on plot points or character motivations and need targeted, expert guidance.
• You want intensive feedback without an ongoing coaching commitment.
• You're ready to invest in your story's foundation to save time and frustration during revisions.

This package delivers precise, actionable feedback designed to elevate your story's structure and set you up for success.